tornadopilot2's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[HoopzShort #1 - Jeff]

first REAL flash?

Here's some constructive criticism.
1. Try to make the character actually walk.
2. Head disappear as ending? At least put in a "replay?" button so we know it actually ended.
3. Too short. Please make it longer with more (and better) jokes.
Now some good things that made a 4/10:
1. character looks okay.
2. background looks fine.
3. It's not a spam or a "I hate you" message.

Hope users actually looks at it before voting.

thehoopz responds:

i hate you

[GPE Ep1 (DBZ style)]

I can sense possibility.

Your characters were drawn quite similar to DBZ. The background could use a little more work. And I hope you could include some fighting action that is much faster than just a pause after a move. I'm pretty sure you'll have a good series to make.

bashscrazy responds:

Will try to for the next episode!
Thanks ;)